tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post2898705241176629863..comments2024-02-17T08:14:14.308-06:00Comments on imaginary garden with real toads: Collaboration with Margaret & Lolamouse Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-55890074775881340812013-07-24T20:11:12.295-05:002013-07-24T20:11:12.295-05:00I LOVE the process you chose to develop this colla...I LOVE the process you chose to develop this collaboration and the outcome is spectacular!! Outstanding job, ladies!! Thank you!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-41815549388931617172013-07-19T04:59:38.774-05:002013-07-19T04:59:38.774-05:00Amazing how this came together. If I hadn't re...Amazing how this came together. If I hadn't read how it was written, I would never have thought lines were hidden before writing the next lines!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-61582265095632515992013-07-19T00:40:29.504-05:002013-07-19T00:40:29.504-05:00I thought I already commented ~ Here it is again ...I thought I already commented ~ Here it is again ~ I love the process, pictures, surreal theme and final outcome ~ Well done ladies ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-44601083068786013542013-07-18T20:55:14.484-05:002013-07-18T20:55:14.484-05:00Did Sherry just say "ass" ? Ha. High pr...Did Sherry just say "ass" ? Ha. High praise indeed. Thank you all for the enthusiastic response and thanks to Sheri (Lolamouse) for the surrealistic approach Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-45065122360048658352013-07-18T19:35:16.257-05:002013-07-18T19:35:16.257-05:00What a WAY COOL way to collaborate. I am so impres...What a WAY COOL way to collaborate. I am so impressed though am not sure how you managed such unison of voice, and RHYMING when alternating lines in such a way. It reads like one voice, it has depth and rhyme and meter, it kicks Surrealism's ASS, and then it gets topped off by a fantastic image.<br /><br />Wow.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-86335440932447778862013-07-18T15:51:11.642-05:002013-07-18T15:51:11.642-05:00Awesome post. I love the poem. Awesome post. I love the poem. Self Sagacityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14404148735941132540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-47600836257194731272013-07-18T15:08:44.041-05:002013-07-18T15:08:44.041-05:00Just beautiful work, Ladies!Just beautiful work, Ladies!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-9938711622853254472013-07-18T14:34:52.815-05:002013-07-18T14:34:52.815-05:00So beautiful! Especially the last 2 stanzas for me...So beautiful! Especially the last 2 stanzas for me--congratulations to both of you!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-54873657630277149972013-07-18T13:41:00.495-05:002013-07-18T13:41:00.495-05:00Love the surrealist theme, pictures, writing proce...Love the surrealist theme, pictures, writing process and final product ~ Beautiful ladies, cheers from BC ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-90670526950588984442013-07-18T12:23:25.787-05:002013-07-18T12:23:25.787-05:00You know I love the surrealists, and this sounds l...You know I love the surrealists, and this sounds like such a creative and fun way to collaborate--enjoyed it much, ladies--and I say let that red balloon go flying. ;_)hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-40721467541227431382013-07-18T11:55:56.862-05:002013-07-18T11:55:56.862-05:00Love it! We play at school a lot this game...:)Love it! We play at school a lot this game...:)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-53504559922777354942013-07-18T11:40:54.558-05:002013-07-18T11:40:54.558-05:00I love what you two have created~
Visually stunnin...I love what you two have created~<br />Visually stunning-I have to read it again! I agree I am blown away :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-74351290990632755082013-07-18T11:04:43.504-05:002013-07-18T11:04:43.504-05:00Wow!! This whole concept just blows me away! I rea...Wow!! This whole concept just blows me away! I read the poem first as a whole then again - focusing on the second lines and responses to see how the poem developed - Amazing! <br /><br />Thank you for your informative introduction, and the photos really add the finishing touch.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-33375088676319820772013-07-18T10:23:53.385-05:002013-07-18T10:23:53.385-05:00Giid job. You have a great way with words.Giid job. You have a great way with words.LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853494568526683537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-46047506550206665722013-07-18T09:24:04.376-05:002013-07-18T09:24:04.376-05:00Glad you all enjoyed being surreal! This poem was ...Glad you all enjoyed being surreal! This poem was so much fun to write with Margaret, and then she topped herself by creating the image at the bottom! Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-42878152672034766562013-07-18T08:41:25.195-05:002013-07-18T08:41:25.195-05:00I love LOVE this .. what a great way to collaborat...I love LOVE this .. what a great way to collaborate. Trust must be essential. You two poets managed it beautifully. Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-89470488232068302682013-07-18T08:33:42.405-05:002013-07-18T08:33:42.405-05:00whoosh, what a beautiful poem. so excellent!whoosh, what a beautiful poem. so excellent!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-32677448488461233772013-07-18T08:27:56.571-05:002013-07-18T08:27:56.571-05:00As usual with the "exquisite corpse," th...As usual with the "exquisite corpse," the unity that emerges is AMAZING and in this case even more so because you knew where the poem ended instead of adding and adding. Your essay describing surrealism is wonderful--it makes me want to play too--and the poem! Poetry as candy to dive into, to dissolve "pleasantly" and then to "reassemble" and release. Powerful! Possible! I love it.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-92095171641283352252013-07-18T02:48:45.477-05:002013-07-18T02:48:45.477-05:00yes it gives a new wonderful effect and great inve...yes it gives a new wonderful effect and great inventiveness:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-10817406703429928462013-07-18T02:01:37.450-05:002013-07-18T02:01:37.450-05:00So, it got deleted twice. It was complimentary and...So, it got deleted twice. It was complimentary and full of lah-di-dah phrases, believe me.<br />Great job. I loved it. Would never have picked it out as a collaboration.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-77639939262455015452013-07-18T02:00:03.999-05:002013-07-18T02:00:03.999-05:00Sorry about that coming through twice. I tried to ...Sorry about that coming through twice. I tried to delete it and it said, "Comment deleted" but it lied. Then it told me I didn't have access to deleting it.<br />Sigh.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-20324626094892114712013-07-18T01:34:36.676-05:002013-07-18T01:34:36.676-05:00This is a wonderful collaboration! Opens up to per...This is a wonderful collaboration! Opens up to perspectives of the other poet as well - a bit of one, a it of other and a total picture!<br /><br />The word play is superb here!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.com