tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post2946246209948416182..comments2024-02-17T08:14:14.308-06:00Comments on imaginary garden with real toads: Fashion Me Your Words to FOLD ~ In AprilSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-79416910416521390942018-04-28T18:25:56.121-05:002018-04-28T18:25:56.121-05:00Looking forward to reading your poem Marylyn
Much...Looking forward to reading your poem Marylyn<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-9319648538776152762018-04-28T13:51:26.457-05:002018-04-28T13:51:26.457-05:00I'm now freaking out -- as I do with every for...I'm now freaking out -- as I do with every form challenge -- but I'll do my best!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-67450586762345226372018-04-28T13:33:46.331-05:002018-04-28T13:33:46.331-05:00Dear a
I read your poem it didnt measure up in poe...Dear a<br />I read your poem it didnt measure up in poetry form or theme. Will be happy to read again if you re write.<br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-79164342690724722072018-04-28T13:23:06.185-05:002018-04-28T13:23:06.185-05:00This form was fun to work with!This form was fun to work with!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09054732378669659210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-54691330659331717282018-04-28T13:09:04.021-05:002018-04-28T13:09:04.021-05:00Gillena,
Mine only works if you count French kisse...Gillena,<br />Mine only works if you count French kisses as destructive weapons. They do dissolve all my powers of resistance. xoxo<br />I had fun working with your created form tooahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14201071621186538148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-80576976119542630902018-04-28T12:30:09.229-05:002018-04-28T12:30:09.229-05:00Thank you for writing today Willow
Much🌼loveThank you for writing today Willow<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-86314104679892314462018-04-28T10:49:21.071-05:002018-04-28T10:49:21.071-05:00I don't do "fussy forms" - but maybe...I don't do "fussy forms" - but maybe I should, more often - BUT I really like your form, (this is my second go at it) - and for some reason, it "works" for me, at least in my head ~ so fun play/penning time!<br /><br />Thanks for hosting Gillena - and Happy penning/weekend to one and allAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-33309378967203207082018-04-28T10:12:22.635-05:002018-04-28T10:12:22.635-05:00Good!!! Fireblossom
Much🌼loveGood!!! Fireblossom<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-44636190672874226932018-04-28T10:03:44.718-05:002018-04-28T10:03:44.718-05:00I found this form really challenging, Gillena, how...I found this form really challenging, Gillena, however challenge is good, thank you so much. :-)Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-43935407307266030912018-04-28T09:25:44.638-05:002018-04-28T09:25:44.638-05:00Got it. Thank you. :-)Got it. Thank you. :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-55016851876652932912018-04-28T09:02:31.022-05:002018-04-28T09:02:31.022-05:00Thank you for your appreciation of The Fold Rosema...Thank you for your appreciation of The Fold Rosemary; happy to know you like it<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-33669544809437178462018-04-28T08:52:04.546-05:002018-04-28T08:52:04.546-05:00Yes Fireblossom: lines 1.3.5.7.9 and 11 are rhyme...Yes Fireblossom: lines 1.3.5.7.9 and 11 are rhyme lines<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-5366093553017228612018-04-28T08:49:41.123-05:002018-04-28T08:49:41.123-05:00Looking gorward to reading your poem Björn.
I onl...Looking gorward to reading your poem Björn. <br />I only lately, that is, since i started wtiting within the garden, learnt about the rondeau. Yes; i agree with you, for i can see some similarity.<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-18494072412627207122018-04-28T08:46:59.148-05:002018-04-28T08:46:59.148-05:00I read your poem Paul, even though you have not ye...I read your poem Paul, even though you have not yet linked in. You got it, nice unexpected twist to the weapon aspect, and the form follows through correctly.<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-5128775033286302182018-04-28T08:44:04.773-05:002018-04-28T08:44:04.773-05:00Thank you. Glad you were able to sort it out from ...Thank you. Glad you were able to sort it out from there. Looking forward to reading your poem today<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-1604145511844813382018-04-28T08:42:38.372-05:002018-04-28T08:42:38.372-05:00Sorry you didnt get it. The end phrase rhyme is wh...Sorry you didnt get it. The end phrase rhyme is what i want for Lines 1.5. And 11.<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-88489395989761502832018-04-28T08:40:21.961-05:002018-04-28T08:40:21.961-05:00The fold is a bit similar to a rondeau... and it w...The fold is a bit similar to a rondeau... and it was a long time since I wrote one.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-74548421160995833642018-04-28T07:43:26.300-05:002018-04-28T07:43:26.300-05:00Interesting form. I think I got it.I do find with ...Interesting form. I think I got it.I do find with some forms though that I am more concerned with form than the poem.Tricky balance.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-62621326500376977512018-04-28T07:12:00.124-05:002018-04-28T07:12:00.124-05:00Okay, every other, as in alternating. That could b...Okay, every other, as in alternating. That could be a lot clearer. had to read the page about your invented form to see what you meant. It was clear there.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-47033606372193101962018-04-28T07:02:43.335-05:002018-04-28T07:02:43.335-05:00Either your instructions are off, or your example ...Either your instructions are off, or your example is. You have said that "the rhyme in line 1 continues in every other line." EVERY other line. But none of your even-numbered lines (2,4,6,8,10)follow any rhyme at all, let alone from line 1. Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-23653515112803901982018-04-28T06:59:26.732-05:002018-04-28T06:59:26.732-05:00I have linked Margaret in
much love...I have linked Margaret in<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-57688678282315604422018-04-28T06:13:26.624-05:002018-04-28T06:13:26.624-05:00Could someone link me up to this challenge. I’m aw...Could someone link me up to this challenge. I’m away from home and can’t figure out how to do it from my phone app. Thanks. I’ll be home tonight to visit and commentMargarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-83116877090155571222018-04-28T05:51:49.069-05:002018-04-28T05:51:49.069-05:00Thank you Rosemary, Sanaa, Kim for your interest.
...Thank you Rosemary, Sanaa, Kim for your interest.<br /><br />Rosemary i will edit and try to fix that link.<br /><br />Thank you Vivian for linking in so early along with Kim and Sanaa; great responses for you.<br /><br />A happy 28 to all garden dwellers<br /><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-34240206427564675392018-04-28T02:39:09.880-05:002018-04-28T02:39:09.880-05:00A most challenging prompt, Gillena 💜 Sharing my p...A most challenging prompt, Gillena 💜 Sharing my poem "Inside a criminal mind"... Day 28! Phew!☕Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-28003197631758835552018-04-28T01:45:15.527-05:002018-04-28T01:45:15.527-05:00The fold form looks complicated but, like origami,...The fold form looks complicated but, like origami, the construction is engrossing and you can use it to develop your own shapes. Thank you Gillena! Have a great weekend.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.com