tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post3052772443516487861..comments2024-02-17T08:14:14.308-06:00Comments on imaginary garden with real toads: Personal Challenge 5Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-6495099381472234882012-01-08T12:58:43.896-06:002012-01-08T12:58:43.896-06:00Very effective how you played off the "wheel&...Very effective how you played off the "wheel" and "reel" images of being tortured and in pain. It gave the whole poem a feeling of disrupted time periods.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-53250090869411359892012-01-08T12:47:08.073-06:002012-01-08T12:47:08.073-06:00Wow, Abin. This is fantastic! Especially your last...Wow, Abin. This is fantastic! Especially your last line. Wonderfully written!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-19007813728367535872012-01-08T10:23:34.835-06:002012-01-08T10:23:34.835-06:00the term "black and white" more than sig...the term "black and white" more than signifying moral good and evil stand, at least for me, for memories. maybe it comes with associating it with black and white negatives..memories, remember my dear friend, are wonderful things..as long as you don't have to think of the past...sayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12141178112411062040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-79415173081749804732012-01-08T00:03:23.049-06:002012-01-08T00:03:23.049-06:00Thank you all :)Thank you all :)Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-36777403137882701392012-01-07T09:28:04.503-06:002012-01-07T09:28:04.503-06:00You may think the piece belated, Abin. I think it ...You may think the piece belated, Abin. I think it perfected. It flows with the ease and clarity of purpose that a well-edited poem conveys. You did us all justice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-81263379242695311402012-01-07T09:20:44.049-06:002012-01-07T09:20:44.049-06:00Wow Abin, you rose to the challenge!
I love "...Wow Abin, you rose to the challenge!<br /><br />I love "more than black and white reels, you captured the unredeeming urn of pain and angst, and haunted nights spoked in wheel and caskets"<br /><br />I love movies and you took me back to times where dust lingers, with fear n' magic! Great Job!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-46569866909007866162012-01-07T08:15:49.618-06:002012-01-07T08:15:49.618-06:00yes, and the line "rattle my sense of time an...yes, and the line "rattle my sense of time and tense" really made me stop and consider. so jarring, to have your sense of tense be off. i never thought to describe that. excellent!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-87080533194400320812012-01-07T07:47:05.194-06:002012-01-07T07:47:05.194-06:00I love what you did with this challenge. More th...I love what you did with this challenge. More than black and white reels, you captured the unredeeming urn of pain and angst, and haunted nights spoked in wheel and caskets.<br /><br />Past tense, not. Bravo and <br /><br />thanks for being a good sport.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-13527423667634176532012-01-07T00:28:32.102-06:002012-01-07T00:28:32.102-06:00This is a super response to the black and white ch...This is a super response to the black and white challenge, Abin, with one of the oldest horror movie monsters of them all, Frankenstein's monster!<br />I love the the internal rhyme here: "And rattle my sense of time and tense" — I understand that feeling.<br />I can't imagine what I would do if someone presented me with a personal challenge. Panic, probably. But you have handled it well.<br /><br />Kay, Alberta, Canada<br />An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous TravelKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-33492453675928062472012-01-07T00:21:14.436-06:002012-01-07T00:21:14.436-06:00Somehow those old black and white movies, especial...Somehow those old black and white movies, especially the horror flicks, were so much more sinister and creepy than those we see today.. You have captured so well the way those images may haunt one still, especially in the dead of night. Thank you for agreeing to participate in the personal challenge.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com