tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post938172434432990802..comments2024-02-17T08:14:14.308-06:00Comments on imaginary garden with real toads: Personal Challenge 6Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-75842741665208995172012-01-11T08:22:14.559-06:002012-01-11T08:22:14.559-06:00This is the kind of poetry which blows over me lik...This is the kind of poetry which blows over me like a fresh sea breeze at the end of a very tiring hot day: just a great woooosh of wind and salt and spray to take the breath away.<br /><br />I am so glad that you accepted this challenge, and delivered an extraordinary response:<br /><br />For me, caution is just<br />the laughing mouth of the funnel...<br /><br />What a spirit has been captured in the narrative - red boots and all.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-9432657454093447342012-01-11T06:54:50.212-06:002012-01-11T06:54:50.212-06:00Quite the storm you brewed up there! I love it! Gr...Quite the storm you brewed up there! I love it! Great idea for a challenge and great response!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-81194213970818782712012-01-10T22:16:39.321-06:002012-01-10T22:16:39.321-06:00yes, "caution is just the laughing mouth of t...yes, "caution is just the laughing mouth of the funnel," yes. love this, love you! true love, matey.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-84957599077825275532012-01-10T21:06:14.529-06:002012-01-10T21:06:14.529-06:00I liked it. I don't want to critique a poet bu...I liked it. I don't want to critique a poet but... I don't understand the bright red boots?Hannah Pratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241656929267868673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-13156013706165563222012-01-10T18:42:09.743-06:002012-01-10T18:42:09.743-06:00FANTASTIC poem, Grace! Wow. Especially like "...FANTASTIC poem, Grace! Wow. Especially like "the laughing mouth of the funnel" and "You tell me my eyes have informed the green of the sky"........but the entire piece is wonderful. Loved it.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-11321216524283824982012-01-10T17:09:19.938-06:002012-01-10T17:09:19.938-06:00Wow...a steamy storm. You did a great job on the c...Wow...a steamy storm. You did a great job on the challenge!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-28887999015454787702012-01-10T15:17:49.679-06:002012-01-10T15:17:49.679-06:00Thanks, Abin! Sorry about the day/time confusion. ...Thanks, Abin! Sorry about the day/time confusion. I had fun with this.Grace O'Malleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16420504323506157621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2542041444980449672.post-16176639203252671642012-01-10T15:05:11.247-06:002012-01-10T15:05:11.247-06:00Thanks Grace for accepting the challenge and comin...Thanks Grace for accepting the challenge and coming up with such a smashing piece. Of course, I knew this would be the case :)<br />Pirates are after all all too comfortable with storms or sirens.<br />great piece this.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.com