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Years ago I read a couple of lines of poetry by L.S.
Asekoff which has lingered in my working mind, like tones of a darkly resonant
bell: "Avoid what tempts,/ move
toward what threatens."
As poetics go, it's a word to the wise: You are often
fooled by what you think you know best. Resist such certainties in order to go
deeper, to get to the heart of the truth.
Implicit in the notion of resistance is that the best—the
pièce de
résistance, so to speak—is yet to come. We must avoid the
temptation of completion; our poems are ever only in their latest draft. There
is always another room in that dream.
Temptation is an idea old as the hills, or at least the
Garden of Eden with its serpent-woman conundrum. Humankind was perfect until
tempted with that shiny sweet-looking apple in Eve's Venusian palm. Succumbing
to the desire for immediate reward, we did the one thing we weren't supposed to
do—taste of the tree of knowledge—and got ourselves evicted from Paradise. Original
sin is the failure to resist. (And the temptation, patriarchs, comes from within.)
But what of poetic resistance? What aesthetic temptations
do we indulge at our peril? I am at my creative worst when indulging in short
cuts, old tropes and redundancies—easy solutions which usually wreck me
offshore of the sublime. There's a rote voice in my ear, ticking off in iambic
pentameter, dictating the old soundtrack by which I write the same poem every
time—damn! How did I get back on that same old singsong bangagong Muzak track?
I've become Swinburne, swimming naked in tidy couplets; Keats without the
urning, pocket Ginsburg howls without untidy burning.
Mailer once said you should never fall in love with your
own writing, because when that happens it means you're writing crap. But how are we to resist the very lamp leading
us through the labyrinth? That's quite a rub. In his poem "Man Carrying
Thing," Wallace Stevens tells us that the poem must resist the
intelligence / almost successfully." That "almost" is the qualifier: we are writing, right? We are chained to
medium and imuse. Resist too much and you're blocked, silent, dead, turning to
the TV or the daily Sudoku. And however
much you try, resist, revise, remake, remodel, you never know if your work is
any good. Ever.
Resistance is a way of not going too easily or heedlessly
into one's Voice. There's a sequence: first the apple of temptation with its
immediate satisfying result, and then there's the greater thing which comes of
refusal, patience, waiting, and cultivation. Then finding what's behind the
found and the known. The secret country, the hidden paradise we can't see,
can't sing, because our next sentences are too chained to their first.
Jack Gilbert lived and wrote this way, refusing the easy
career for one largely of isolation and near-poverty, getting close and closer
to the insides of his words. He published a book a decade in his 40 year
career, taking all the time in the world to get to the truth. This, from Gilbert's poem "Tear It
Down":
We find out the heart only by dismantling
what
the heart knows. By redefining the morning,
we find a morning that comes just after
darkness.
We can break through marriage into marriage.
By insisting on love we spoil it, get beyond
affection and wade mouth-deep into love.
We must unlearn the constellations to see the
stars...
Can resistance become a habit, a way of chasing words almost successfully? Rilke wrote in one of his Letters to a Young Poet: "...If
only we arrange our life in accordance with the principle which tells us that
we must always trust in the difficult, then what now appears to us as the most
alien will become our most intimate and trusted experience." To Rilke, the very face of beauty can only be
revealed in the shadow of its alternate, the one turned toward death. How else
are we to fully appreciate the rose window, the blushed secretive smile, the
angel singing above the grave? In his
late masterwork series "Sonnets to Orpheus" and "Duino
Elegies," affirmation and triumph are found down a long road of
resistance.
But
here's the rub: Such an astringent is not readily or headily applied. Ever. I
am constantly fooled by softer, easier ways of resistance—suburban
approximations of Eden at best. The result is neither hallowed or harrowing. You can liken it to the dialogue about
resistance we've been hearing in American politics these past few years.
Midterm elections are approaching, primary election results indicate that the
#MeToo movement is mounting an effective resistance to the hard-right politics
of Donald Trump. There has been a surge of women for office, and more than half
of them running have won their primaries. If your sympathies go that way, your
Facebook feed is garnished with Resistance memes.
Last
week, an anonymous senior White House official penned a op-ed for the New York
Times about a quiet internal resistance against an elected President of no
moral and scant mental capacity. She or he wrote that the real business of the
Republic was being carried on behind his back, keeping the country out of war
and criminal debacle by diverting the nation's business from him. An immense
flood of comment and critique has arisen from all sides. Is such resistance
traitorous? False? The secret oath of every Republican in love with present policies
despite the man? Cowardice? Pragmatics of the Fall? Et cetera.
The
best thing I've read on the topic (and very germane to this challenge) came
from Teju Cole, photography critic for the New York Times Magazine and Gore
Vidal Professor of the Practice of Creative Writing at Harvard. He compared our
current cadres of Resistance on both the American left and right as carrying on
too much in the disembodied squawkbox of social media. He compares that the legacy
of the French Resistance during the Second World War, where the stakes were
bloody, merciless and real:
... A
dangerous commitment to resistance made by hundreds of thousands, tens of
thousands of whom died in France alone. For a spell in the early ’40s, whenever
the members of the Resistance killed a Nazi, the Nazis would execute 50
innocent French; an unspeakable calculus, but it did not stop the Resistance
(its Communist wing in particular) from killing Nazis. It was a terrible time.
The Resistance recognized that what was as stake was not just political power
but also human dignity, which, all question of tactical efficacy aside, the
resisters saw as nonnegotiable.
This
history looms each time the word “resistance” is evoked in the current American
political crisis. It judges the triviality of our responses. The sacred word
has been made banal, its intensity dulled. The triviality is not in the
predicament — so many have died here already, and many more will die — nor is
it in the serious work being undertaken by so many people far from the
spotlight, but in the voices of those who set the public tone. How I long now,
on behalf of America, for Beckett’s aridity, for Melville’s gloom, for
Stéphane’s desire to bear witness, for a sobriety of affect that matches the
enormity of the crime. How are we to live in this? How are we to inhabit the
principle behind the word “resistance” when the meaning of the word itself has
changed so much?
Refuse a resistance excised of courage? Refuse the conventional arena
and take the fight elsewhere? Refuse to eat with the enemy, refuse to feed the
enemy? Refuse to participate in the logic of the crisis, refuse to be reactive
to its provocations? Refuse to forget last year’s offenses and last month’s and
last week’s? Refuse the news cycle, refuse commentary? Refuse to place
newsworthiness above human solidarity? Refuse to be intimidated by pragmatism?
Refuse to be judged by cynics? Refuse to be too easily consoled? Refuse to
admire mere political survival? Refuse to accept the calculation of the lesser
evil? Refuse nostalgia? Refuse the binary of the terrible past and the
atrocious present? Refuse to ignore the plight of the imprisoned, the tortured
and the deported? Refuse to be mesmerized by shows of power? Refuse the mob?
Refuse to play, refuse decorum, refuse accusation, refuse distraction, which is
a tolerance of death-dealing by another name? And when told you can’t refuse,
refuse that, too? (Teju Cole, "Resist,
Refuse." New York Times
Magazine, Sept. 8, 2018)
Sorry
to belabor the quote, but Cole I think gets to the deepest sense of resistance. How
much are we willing—no, adamant—to refuse in the name of living and loving more
genuinely, more truthfully? Are we citizens not only of nations, but of a world
with an ecology with vastly different purposes than suburban blight, than
cities of night? And beyond politics, how does resistance inform our poetics?
Resistance nails the crucial difference between a hobby and an art. It's the
difference between today's revision and tomorrow's, between a hollow trope and a
newly arrived truth. Do you write because you like to, or because your
existence as a soul on earth depends upon it? What temptations bar the way, and
how many of them are you willing to sacrifice?
In French tradition, the chief dish in a meal is the called the pièce de
résistance—
"the best or most exciting thing,"
usually the last in a series. We have to work through the quotidian and stereotypical,
the bland and the wrong to arrive at the heart inside the heart of the matter.
For this challenge, write about
resistance. Resist the theme, struggle with it, go down with it, come back with
what saves you. Resist your poetic, your
politics, your body's politic in love, your failure and death. What temps you
to say nothing, or worse, too little? Conversely, why does poetry matter? What can it alone
say to the world?
What is your pièce de résistance—the poem you can't live without? I mean for today ...
Viva la Resistance!
17 comments:
...maybe I should write about resisting the "resistance" here in America. (It wouldn't be worth the headache, honestly). This will be fascinating (and frustrating for me to read, I'm sure, but I will - might not comment but I am sure I will learn something from it in style and technique. I have been avoiding such things as too much news and flipping through A LOT on Facebook - and am in a pretty good place and probably won't be writing to this prompt unless I can come up with a unique angle - gave it thought all morning and nothing came up yet.
I will read and thanks for the prompt. I realize a lot of poets LOVE writing in a "resistance" voice. :)
This is a true challenge... and it will make me think a lot. Being a compromise type I realize that i have to go down to my core principles... those things that make me stand my ground and not move an inch... or can you resist in other ways... as a matter of fact since we just passed an election here with a very unclear result I decided to join a political party... after all if you never work from within, how can you complain about the result... but it's easier to find a party of my liking here... after all there are 8 to chose from.
Reistance isn't just about politics you know. There are all manner of resistances. As an engineer I learned about wind resistance, water resistance and of course, there is always poetry. I am resisting the cliched politics!!!
Thanks all, you are certainly free to write poems about political resistance but my intention was to delve into the theme of poetic resistance. I thought the example from the political realm served to illustrate the limits one can go in their resistance to what's no longer working in poetry.
Thanks for your clarification... yes that made it much clearer... I tried to put a piece together...
Yes, I am aware of that and I'm trying to express "resistance" in a way that may or may not work - a non-political resistance - I just felt that most from this Garden who live in USA would write about politics - and I can certainly see why. My political leanings are varied - in my mind I consider myself a FDR gal - of which it is my opinion he would NOT fit into today's Rep or Dem party. FDR certainly had his faults - the whole Japanese internment was horrible. Anyway, I didn't mean to be obtuse about this challenge - it is just a hard one and that isn't a bad thing - I will read everyone's poems and critique or comment from a poetic viewpoint - not political. ;)
Loved the challenge, Brendan😊 it's Sunday morning here.. just woke up and having tea☕ going to read and comment in a few minutes. Happy Weekend, everyone!💜
Thanks for hosting Brendan - certainly, you offer us so many avenues to consider - to distill and perhaps first, dig for the roots ...
I've taken this in a wholly unexpected direction, I suspect.
I realize now I missed the point of this prompt most likely - not resistance as a verb so much ... I think we were to delve into what stops our flow of truth - how do we as poets resist a new path or what we might even really want to say... I have a feeling this is too deep for me. ;P
Margaret - maybe, you should consider that you've taken one aspect of it, interpreted it as you've thought, and used it, generally, as a point of inspiration. And in so doing, have offered us ideas to consider, in your response, to how we function and relate, in our world, and within certain frameworks. There is nothing wrong with considering this as a point of departure, yes? So your response was about how you've found someone else's courageous and bold story inspiring - because it meant choosing to say "no" - to persist and resist the "norms and standards" of the day - because they understood "the genius" within all differences. Seems to me, there's nothing wrong with this interpretation.
Hi All.. Glad to see the garden is budding with commentary. It is all very interesting to me, coming from South Africa where resistance to the powers that be is kind of genetically encoded and nothing much has changed.. just the powers.
I would truly love to write to this prompt, Brendan. my hope is that some words will come to me this morning.
Hi Brendan! Quite a thought-provoking prompt. I'm not so sure I stayed on-message. I wrote more about internal struggles and good vs bad thoughts ...hope it makes sense though. Have a great weekend! :)
It has been great to read so many heartfelt responses to the challenge, including challenging the challenge itself. Great to see the work put in, because it counts. A fine sendoff for me as I will be taking a sabbatical from challenges at the Garden. I know you all will continue to knock them out of the park.
Well, I went, as might be expected, straight for the political, lol. So those who are tired of it, and oh my goodness, am I ever tired of it, are welcome to skip mine. I wont mind. Smiles. I am late getting around as my vertigo is kicking my ass. Three weeks now. Sigh.
Brendan, I just saw yu are taking a sabbatical....thank you for all of your prompts!!!!
Thank you so much for this fantastic prompt - I've been chewing at it all weekend. A little late, but have posted my resistance poem. I'll get around and read everyone's later.
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