Cherita was created by ai li, and you can read her lovely expression about the form here:
What’s Your Story? Cherita KnowhowCherita builds on haiku and tanka, and was inspired by the six-word story, which was inspired by Hemingway, so hey, there is a rich history here. You remember Hemingway’s:
For sale, baby shoes, never wornCherita is a six-line poem in three stanzas. First stanza is one line, second stanza two lines, third stanza three lines. Line length is up to you. The idea is to write a short story in six lines.
I tried it out and offer this simple tale for an example:
I should rake leaves
but I decide
to do something else
when thinking about leaves
and wind
and justice
photo and cherita poem above by Marian Kent |
I wonder if we might try this and even include our handwritten/notebook versions as Kerry inspired us to share a couple weeks back! If you like, no obligation, but it might be a pretty form to share that way. Have fun!
This is lovely, Marian. Your example is so elegant, just the right mood for the season.
ReplyDeleteI love the form. Mine is more seasonal light disorder :)
ReplyDeleteI had never written this form but found it lovely. Mine is a triple cherita.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kerry about the elegant form, Marian. A lovely prompt for a rainy Saturday!
ReplyDeleteSpectacular challenge, Maid Marian!
ReplyDeleteI love this... and I do love story telling. I'll be back in a while
ReplyDeleteHello, friends! I've been traveling in a bit of a whirlwind but am home and catching up. I have a cherita almost ready and will be posting it and reading your offerings tomorrow. Glad this one resonates! xoxo to all, M.
ReplyDeletethanks for hosting and suggesting this form Marian - and I like your "example" one - it has just enough of a hint of dissonance and a slight weariness to it ...
ReplyDeleteYour cherita is great Marian. Love this form.
ReplyDeleteI had to do a second... I really loved this form.
ReplyDeleteHello Everyone- Adding my link today! Will pop by to read others shortly. I love this form!
ReplyDeleteGlad this form resonates! I was unfamiliar but am really loving all of your offerings. My second link is just the ode to leaves and justice shared in this post. I think I'll be writing more cheritas, though! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! What a fun challenge.
ReplyDeleteI love the beauty of this form
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