Cherry Blossoms and Fuji
The Japanese are all about honoring the seasons and nature. Their belief system, Shinto, holds that when a person dies, they may in that death become a part of nature - from the lowliest flea to the greatest mountain. Therefore, all of nature is to honored. The poetic form of Japan, created by Basho, is the haiku. The haiku is all about being in the moment, all about nature. There is a directory of over 50,000 kigo called a saijiki. A kigo is literally a name for a seasonal piece of a season. I am not going to ask you all to write a haiku. What I am going to do is to ask you for a brief (and I mean brief) poem about a kigo in spring. the form is your choice. The subject is your choice. Just make it about spring. Here is a list of spring kigo. This is from an extensive list of which many kigo have been deleted or apply only to Japan. I have translated the kigo from the Japanese. Please pick one or several and write a poem or, even a haiku. Remember: haiku must use a kigo and a kireji (a cutting word), be in the moment (sort of like a photograph) and have three lines: 5-7-5 syllable count or, short-long-short lines. Please write no more than 10 lines. In the Japanese tradition make it brief, to the point, and without a lot of flowery description. It is all about the season. Please take the time to read all the poets who post here. I read all the poets every week because I enjoy reading and learning from your words. Who knows, you may learn something? smiles
Konichiwa Hikigaeru (greetings Toads): I am coming to you live from a hospital room. I have aspiration pneumonia! So cheer me up with your poems using one or more of the given kigo about spring. Make it rain Toads, make it rain. I will read and comment on your poems as I am able. Thank you all so much.
ReplyDeleteGreetings Toads and best wishes for a speedy recovery, Toni! I have tried my best with a haiku that I hope will cheer you up. Lots of love xx
ReplyDeleteToni, I hope the doctors are making things better for you, and you don't have to stay in the hospital for long.
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ReplyDeleteThank you Toni for a wonderful prompt, and thank you Magaly for all your help as well. Just glad to have made it here. I feel my piece is a bit too long, but was able to stay on subject so hope that works. Hope everyone has a great weekend, and Toni I hope you get well soon. Sending hugs.
ReplyDeleteGeeez, I can't leave you on your own for 5 minutes, can I, without you falling down a mine shaft or something. Feel better!
ReplyDeleteHope I can cheer you up... no real spring here but no winter either.. I think we are still in winter-spring...
ReplyDeleteGoodness Toni... Get better soon!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome, Toni. I spent th day doing research, we are trying for a tree protection bylaw here, so it is nice to turn my thoughts to poetry, especially brief poetry.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness, I just read the comments. You are very dedicated, running your prompt from a hospital bed! Take care, rest as much as you can. Get better!
ReplyDeleteDear Toni, get well soon, and hope the poetry helps. I managed to use a number of the words even whilst taking an upside-down view.
ReplyDeleteOops, suddenly realised I had exceeded the 10 lines. I'm sure my piece is now better for some abbreviating.
ReplyDeleteOh I just love haiku poetry and beauty in brevity. Thank you so much for nice prompt.
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Toni- so sorry to hear you are not feeling well. I have been under the weather as well. Trying my hand at this today, and including a shot of the Superstition Mountains, which are near us.
ReplyDeleteThis was a fun "little, small," project. We attended a large professional stage production of "Momma Mia," in Houston last night. I wrote my ditty waiting for the curtain lifting and posted it during intermission. It is usable but not refined and I'll leave it be Thznks to Toni, getting with this ready and all on the same page was a great production in itself. Good Job, Tomi. Thank you !!!
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