On the mountain tonight the full moon
faces the full sun. Now could be the moment
when we fall apart or we become whole.
Our time seems to be up—I think I even hear it stopping.
Then why have we kept up the singing for so long?
Because that’s the sort of determined creature we are.
Before us, our first task is to astonish,
and then, harder by far, to be astonished.
faces the full sun. Now could be the moment
when we fall apart or we become whole.
Our time seems to be up—I think I even hear it stopping.
Then why have we kept up the singing for so long?
Because that’s the sort of determined creature we are.
Before us, our first task is to astonish,
and then, harder by far, to be astonished.
- from the poem “Astonishment”, by Galway Kinnell
“There are only two ways to live your
life. One is as though nothing is a miracle. The other is as though everything
is a miracle.”
― Albert Einstein
Humpbacks breeching in Alaska
source @Scott Methvin
In Galway Kinnell’s wonderful poem, Astonishment,
time slows as we grasp the concept of
how - big! - this life really is. For me, it is not hard at
all to be astonished – I am constantly amazed by the wonders of nature.
There isn’t a day when I am not astonished by something large or small.
Every day reminds us of the goodness of humans. We
are bathed in sunrises and sunsets beautiful enough to break your heart. How
trees hold hands under the forest floor, that male seahorses give birth, how
many colourful starfish cling to the rocky cliffs at the shore – the fact that
we wake up in the morning, able to see, to stand, to walk – all of it is an
amazement to me. Life’s beauty can bring me to my knees, with the ache of how
transient and fleeting it all is, this beautiful life.
For our challenge, let’s contemplate these topics :
awe, amazement, astonishment, wonder.
Give us a moment, small or large, full of
wonder. Employ whatever form you wish, and use as many or few lines as you need to take
us there.
Hi ho, fellow poets. My source of wonder today was the waves at the beach - HUGE and wild. My poem is about tiny seabird who lives an amazing life. I'm looking forward to reading about your moments of wonder.
ReplyDeleteTrees holding hands? Sometimes I worry about you.
ReplyDeleteBlissing out on jazz. Exhausted...astonished that I can keep my eyes open to write a shadorma:)Nice prompt.
ReplyDeleteSorry, Sherry I submitted the wrong poem. PLease delete it.Thankyou.
ReplyDeleteShay, they do hold hands under the forest floor. Smiles. Rall, a shadorma , how wonderful. I am afraid i dont know how to delete, but am sure it will be okay.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful prompt. Instead of dwelling on the horror that is trumpler, I chose to contemplate autumn trees. Like you, I am always amazed at the goodness that dwells in humans and animals alike.
ReplyDeleteSo much beauty and goodness midst all that is wrong......hopefully it will triumph. Regardless, it warms the heart to see it happening everywhere.
ReplyDeleteGreat prompt Sherry. Wonder is a topic I address continually in my poetry, so this will be fun! :-)
ReplyDeleteYay! There is so much wonder in this world. No end of inspiration to poets.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful prompt to have to consider wonder. ;-) Have a lovely weekend everyone!
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We have to remind ourselves, in the midst of so much rhetoric, that there is also so much beauty! Am so happy this resonates with you.
ReplyDeleteWe should all remember to pause in wonderment at the beauty around us.
ReplyDeleteDear toads, and friends. I have committed myself to a poem a day and illustration a day for instagram's Inktober challenge, so I regret that I have not been active in challenges this month. But I believe I can share my American Sentence of the day with you on Sherry's challenge. Yay!
Out of town for a wedding, will read your awesome poetry Monday morning.
ReplyDeleteThanks, friends. Kerry, you are brave. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteHello all... joining late with a short poem. Maybe the biggest of wonder is actually that we wonder.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the challenge! A timely subject:)
ReplyDeleteBjorn, LOL, you are so right! And are still capable of wonder, in spite of everything.
ReplyDeleteI apologise for joining this awesome party so late, but I've had a n exhausting yet completely wonderful week with my daughter and grandson. I'm about to post, read and comment. I hope you've all had as amazing a weekend as I have a week!
ReplyDeleteKim, there is nothing better than visiting one's child and grandchild. Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your joy in your poem. I love seeing the world through the eyes of a child....so magical.
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